tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667316543569107771.post2463202897166447200..comments2023-11-02T06:26:21.362-07:00Comments on The art of Ziv Ariely: First Phase Of PolishZiv Arielyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16788870530210732092noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667316543569107771.post-27612150934536544032009-01-23T02:30:00.000-08:002009-01-23T02:30:00.000-08:00Thanks Jeremy.I totally agree with you about the l...Thanks Jeremy.<BR/>I totally agree with you about the last part.<BR/>I'll try and do as you suggested.<BR/><BR/>Take care!Ziv Arielyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16788870530210732092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6667316543569107771.post-56944680414058028422009-01-22T23:06:00.000-08:002009-01-22T23:06:00.000-08:00Hi again,looks like it's coming along nicely. I th...Hi again,<BR/><BR/>looks like it's coming along nicely. I think the acting on the guy is spot on.Once you polish it off it will look great.<BR/>The one thing I would say is for my taste (and only my taste, meaning it can still work they way it is.) I would try to keep the woman's acting closer to the guys. It gets a little cartoony at the end when she says "jilting me". I think you can keep it in the same pose you had it for the most part and move her forward and maybe bring her right hand up and close to her chest while she closes her fingers. A more emotional moment. <BR/>Good Luck!!!!!<BR/><BR/><BR/>Cheers<BR/>JJeremy Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16088838228953179094noreply@blogger.com