First Phase Of Polish

I didn't have a lot of time to work on my animation, and if that isn't enough, I've decided to change about a third of my animation (after receiving a few great suggestions).

I just finished working on the first phase of my animation. I didn't even get to work on the lip sync yet, and if I'll have enough time (hopefully) I'll have time to work on the little over laps on the fingers, etc.


Jeremy Shaw said...

Hi again,

looks like it's coming along nicely. I think the acting on the guy is spot on.Once you polish it off it will look great.
The one thing I would say is for my taste (and only my taste, meaning it can still work they way it is.) I would try to keep the woman's acting closer to the guys. It gets a little cartoony at the end when she says "jilting me". I think you can keep it in the same pose you had it for the most part and move her forward and maybe bring her right hand up and close to her chest while she closes her fingers. A more emotional moment.
Good Luck!!!!!


My name is Ziv Ariely. said...

Thanks Jeremy.
I totally agree with you about the last part.
I'll try and do as you suggested.

Take care!