Now you listen to me!

I've decided to participate in This month's competition in the 11 Second Club.
I thought it could be pretty funny if the menacing man will threaten non other than his dog (to be revealed at the long shot in the end).

I've sketched out some really rough thumbnails to start exploring the sequence, then take out some poses, put back in and shift their possitions.
For now I've only made it mostly golden poses and less inbetweens.


Nate Lane said...

hehe I like :D. Keep working hard man! :)

Doron Meir said...

Hi Ziv,

It's great that you're planning with 2D, very strong approach. Looking pretty good! I'd say you could make it even better if you lose some of the poses. The sound sounds very contained, he's obviously putting a lot of energy into NOT taking extreme action. So, as an animator I'd also limit myself to a few poses, and try to work within those poses. I'd also keep his limbs close to his body. Act it out in a sincere way, I think you'll see what I mean.

Keep going man, you're doing great :)

My name is Ziv Ariely. said...

Thanks Doron,
I think I can let go of some of the poses as you are suggesting. Pretty soon I'll be in blocking (I'm not at home for the weekend) and then I'll try and apply your comments.